Hime_Wakana
I have reached Yuki nirvana
"we are not questioning her talent or the hard work she puts into her performances; we are simply concerned that she has been recently showing signs of tiredness"?
It coud be ok even with these words ^^
"we are not questioning her talent or the hard work she puts into her performances; we are simply concerned that she has been recently showing signs of tiredness"?
Martin said:That sounds great so far. I'm perfectly okay with providing my full name and e-mail address as well, FWIW, if it adds credibility and a personal aspect.
The only thing I can think of in terms of altering phrasing or adding anything would be "we are not questioning her talent or the hard work she puts into her performances; we are simply concerned that she has been recently showing signs of tiredness"? It's just a constant nagging feeling in the back of my mind that they feel the weight of expectation from fans, so this message might be a good opportunity to dispel that.
Now I'm being paranoid and over-thinking things!
Martin said:The only thing I can think of in terms of altering phrasing or adding anything would be "we are not questioning her talent or the hard work she puts into her performances; we are simply concerned that she has been recently showing signs of tiredness"? It's just a constant nagging feeling in the back of my mind that they feel the weight of expectation from fans, so this message might be a good opportunity to dispel that.
Now I'm being paranoid and over-thinking things!
HimeWakana said:I think than even if we were writing in English , Yuki-san could translate the message!
ahahahah I think that she knows the basics of the English or she'll ask someone to translate ^^Hmm, dunno...if she uses Google Translate, we are taking a serious risk here
Cerise said:^Hmmm, I’d call it more the ‘texture’ of their voices rather than the pitch, perhaps, because I actually think Kaori has a higher-pitched voice than Hikaru but she doesn’t sound as sharp (probably because of her higher pitched voice, actually, allowing her to reach the higher notes easier than Hikaru).
Rather than ‘breathy’, I’d say Keiko’s voice is quite rich and mellow, so her voice sounds more ‘rounded’ and softer-edged. Kaori I think has the breathy, light, airy voice that sounds very clear and open. Yuuka’s voice is not only high-pitched but it’s also very clear and crisp and quite piercing at times (I believe some people say she sounds quite nasal), so it sounds sharper. Hikaru sounds sharp on high notes because of the way she sings them, I think, it sounds sort of like she pinches(?) (not sure if that’s the right term to use) the notes or otherwise resorts to full-out belting (but then she sounds rough/harsh rather than sharp). But I don’t think Hikaru is a naturally high-pitched singer because she sounds much more comfortable on the lower notes closer to alto. On lower notes she doesn’t sound sharp at all, her voice is much smoother and to me, sort of ‘rolls’ smoothly in the ear. Wakana has a high-pitched voice which is very resonant and which I think is also rich, but in a different way to Keiko’s, and rather than crisp and clear like Yuuka’s it’s smooth and has a fuller sound, which I think is why it doesn’t sound too sharp either. (I always think of Keiko as the vocal equivalent to a cello, Wakana as a violin, I don’t know if it’s just me being weird, but I actually hear some similarities between the texture of the sound the instruments make and the sound of their voices). And Yuriko’s normal voice has a very warm quality to me, her high notes sound richer.