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crystalpink
Guest
Thanks for the English translation for Consolation, Cross.
That's the one I was looking for
That's the one I was looking for
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nimsaj
Guest
since there were various grammar mistakes in the one that was posted, here's my version of consolation
it won’t be granted by merely breathing
for the sake of going deeper
please give me tears and grief
your beautiful god went to an incredibly brutal extent
to love those who violently ruin and destroy
quo vadis domine?
even if your voice has no more prayers or calls
i believe that someday, only your wish will reach me
shouldering burdens,
we pitched forward and walked, in order to escape,
towards the bottom of the stretched out sky
the origin of the stars silently
illuminate your destination
and shine upon the bottom of a valley
that became pale
quo vadis domine?
someday, consolation will be in your hands
inside my longing heart
there is an unreachable place
without giving up, i extend a hand
and until my greedy heart is satisfied and falls asleep
the light will shine from afar
a soul that wants to eat anything it likes
spits out my dreams that it has bitten into
“please have mercy!” i screamed
quo vadis domine?
someday, consolation will be in your hands
when everything has been burnt and exhausted
i believe it will reach you
it won’t be granted by merely breathing
for the sake of going deeper
please give me tears and grief
your beautiful god went to an incredibly brutal extent
to love those who violently ruin and destroy
quo vadis domine?
even if your voice has no more prayers or calls
i believe that someday, only your wish will reach me
shouldering burdens,
we pitched forward and walked, in order to escape,
towards the bottom of the stretched out sky
the origin of the stars silently
illuminate your destination
and shine upon the bottom of a valley
that became pale
quo vadis domine?
someday, consolation will be in your hands
inside my longing heart
there is an unreachable place
without giving up, i extend a hand
and until my greedy heart is satisfied and falls asleep
the light will shine from afar
a soul that wants to eat anything it likes
spits out my dreams that it has bitten into
“please have mercy!” i screamed
quo vadis domine?
someday, consolation will be in your hands
when everything has been burnt and exhausted
i believe it will reach you
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nimsaj
Guest
sorry for the double post. 
again, due to various grammar mistakes in the previous, here are my versions:
yume no daichi
in such a silent
light pink dawn
a song of yearning
that nobody knows of yet
loudly begins
we can go forward
towards the end that has limits
where the future that moves far away
is nostalgically being illuminated on
in order to part with you
someone ties a melody
it will bring us
towards that time that will prevail
we aim for the invisible stars
that are said to exist somewhere in the night sky
and towards the side of turbulent time
we always stretch out towards the future
in the prairie where i hurriedly push my dreams to
i will leave behind a light
in that dazzling
morning you were born
a brilliant song that
nobody knows of yet
began silently
how far shall we go?
this vast world
is continuing at a distance
towards the distance i stretch my hand out to
the land of dreams
the sky is
endlessly blue
hanataba
being unable to hold
a glass bouquet of flowers,
we were petrified
you softly murmur
“let’s cast aside
something, just one thing, here”
i want to untie
the knot that is left
behind on the treetop
of yearning
within your dreams, you lit
the song held in your hands
the coldness of spring’s life
and the far light
above the quiet sand
the way everything is disappearing
is gentle
as if abruptly falling into a slumber
raising our beastly voices
we call out to each other
and laugh by ourselves
in our loneliness
what kind of flower
will someone give me
as i cry?
in a nostalgic morning
i want to believe
that we were born
in a transparent place
lets offer our withering hearts
to tears of spring
my heart that stays empty
can discover every color
of the sky
i step on
yesterday’s bouquet as
as we go on to
the vast plains
again, due to various grammar mistakes in the previous, here are my versions:
yume no daichi
in such a silent
light pink dawn
a song of yearning
that nobody knows of yet
loudly begins
we can go forward
towards the end that has limits
where the future that moves far away
is nostalgically being illuminated on
in order to part with you
someone ties a melody
it will bring us
towards that time that will prevail
we aim for the invisible stars
that are said to exist somewhere in the night sky
and towards the side of turbulent time
we always stretch out towards the future
in the prairie where i hurriedly push my dreams to
i will leave behind a light
in that dazzling
morning you were born
a brilliant song that
nobody knows of yet
began silently
how far shall we go?
this vast world
is continuing at a distance
towards the distance i stretch my hand out to
the land of dreams
the sky is
endlessly blue
hanataba
being unable to hold
a glass bouquet of flowers,
we were petrified
you softly murmur
“let’s cast aside
something, just one thing, here”
i want to untie
the knot that is left
behind on the treetop
of yearning
within your dreams, you lit
the song held in your hands
the coldness of spring’s life
and the far light
above the quiet sand
the way everything is disappearing
is gentle
as if abruptly falling into a slumber
raising our beastly voices
we call out to each other
and laugh by ourselves
in our loneliness
what kind of flower
will someone give me
as i cry?
in a nostalgic morning
i want to believe
that we were born
in a transparent place
lets offer our withering hearts
to tears of spring
my heart that stays empty
can discover every color
of the sky
i step on
yesterday’s bouquet as
as we go on to
the vast plains
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ritardando
Guest
@keikochan4 :
There are still some errors in the transliteration.
As nimsaj has already explained, 腕 can be read as kaina, and not kanaide.
so obbligato should be :
and you missed the 'na' in 'kanawanai' in the beginning of consolation. And there's a wrong kanji in this one 'awaremi o kudasai to sakende'. It should be 'awaremi o kudasai to sakenda'.
and this is the (a bit) corrected kanji :
It may look simple and not that noticeable, but 叫んだ (sakenda) and 叫んで (sakende) have two different meaning.
There are still some errors in the transliteration.
As nimsaj has already explained, 腕 can be read as kaina, and not kanaide.
so obbligato should be :
and you missed the 'na' in 'kanawanai' in the beginning of consolation. And there's a wrong kanji in this one 'awaremi o kudasai to sakende'. It should be 'awaremi o kudasai to sakenda'.
and this is the (a bit) corrected kanji :
It may look simple and not that noticeable, but 叫んだ (sakenda) and 叫んで (sakende) have two different meaning.
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garnetjester
Guest
Thanks a lot for the translations nimsaj! I think you didn't translate this part in Hanataba though...
"subete ga kieteyuku koto ga
fui ni madoromu you ni
yasashii"
before the kemono no koe stanza
which I would translate to something like
"All the things that are disappearing
suddenly become gentle
like a slumber"
but feel free to correct me, my japanese is pretty average at best
"subete ga kieteyuku koto ga
fui ni madoromu you ni
yasashii"
before the kemono no koe stanza
which I would translate to something like
"All the things that are disappearing
suddenly become gentle
like a slumber"
but feel free to correct me, my japanese is pretty average at best
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crystalpink
Guest
Re:
Since, I don't really speak Japanese, I thought sakende was pronounced/sung as sakenda
I heard it as sakenda, but the Romanji lyric here was written as sakende.ritardando said:
Since, I don't really speak Japanese, I thought sakende was pronounced/sung as sakenda
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NenaArindrasari
Guest
Well, is the "consolation" lyrics translation already done? or needs some correction?
Please, post it to the website, I really need the translation. Or you can just tell me where the 'consolation' translation are considered the best from the forum.
if I'm telling the truth, I really want to translate it in to Indonesian language at another blog. but I can only translate it through the english translation. I'm not really mastered japanese language. not yet.
Please, post it to the website, I really need the translation. Or you can just tell me where the 'consolation' translation are considered the best from the forum.
if I'm telling the truth, I really want to translate it in to Indonesian language at another blog. but I can only translate it through the english translation. I'm not really mastered japanese language. not yet.
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ritardando
Guest
Re: Re:
I just realized that the romaji and kanji written by keikochan is a bit wrong when I re-read my post. I was "eh, sakende?" and I look at the kanji keikochan posted and the kanji is indeed 叫んで there so I look at the booklet scan once again and it's not 叫んで but 叫んだ so I corrected it also
crystalpink said:I heard it as sakenda, but the Romanji lyric here was written as sakende.ritardando said:
Since, I don't really speak Japanese, I thought sakende was pronounced/sung as sakenda
I just realized that the romaji and kanji written by keikochan is a bit wrong when I re-read my post. I was "eh, sakende?" and I look at the kanji keikochan posted and the kanji is indeed 叫んで there so I look at the booklet scan once again and it's not 叫んで but 叫んだ so I corrected it also
george1234
Moderator
I'm sorry for all this delay, everyone but things happened. I will do the lyrics today and the 3 following day :)
discography entry now with credits: http://canta-per-me.net/discography/consolation
al fine: http://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/al-fine/
consolation: http://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/consolation/
door: http://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/door/
hanataba: http://canta-per-me.net/hanataba/
signal: http://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/signal/
obbligato: http://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/obbligato/
kichigo no shigemi ni: http://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/kichigo-no-shigemi-ni/
yume no daichi http://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/yume-no-daichi/
discography entry now with credits: http://canta-per-me.net/discography/consolation
al fine: http://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/al-fine/
consolation: http://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/consolation/
door: http://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/door/
hanataba: http://canta-per-me.net/hanataba/
signal: http://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/signal/
obbligato: http://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/obbligato/
kichigo no shigemi ni: http://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/kichigo-no-shigemi-ni/
yume no daichi http://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/yume-no-daichi/
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NenaArindrasari
Guest
"consolation" lyrics Kajiuran addition and correction from last post. (*paper's post)
[Dominus Sante filia mistiota fistala filia]
iki wo suru dake ja kanawai
motto fukaku made yuku tame no
namida to nageki wo kudasai
mugotarashii hodo kirei na kimi no kami-sama wa
hageshiku horobisaru mono dake wo aishita
Quo Vadis Domine?
sono koe wa inori to yobu made mo nai
itsuka kimi no negai dake ga todoku to shinjiteiru
[garuna esta aa]
haritsumeta sora no fumoto e
bokura wa nimotsu wo katsuide
nigeru you ni tsunnomette aruita
hajimari no hoshi wa shizuka ni
kimi no yukusaki wo terashite
aozameta tanizoko ni kagayaku
Quo Vadis Domine?
nagusame wo itsuka kimi no te no naka ni
hoshigaru kokoro no mama de wa
todokanai basho ni aru
[garuna esta]
[kantia sola fili hiya mistiosa ata arito imi to sonti lia]
akiramezu te wo nobasu
yokubukai kokoro ga
mitasarete nemuru made
hikari ni tooi michi wo
[Dominus Sante filia mistiota fistala filia]
nandemo tabetai tamashii
kajiritsuita yume hakisute
awaremi wo kudasai to sakenda
Quo Vadis Domine?
nagusame wo itsuka kimi no te no naka ni
subete moyashitsukushita koro
todoku to shinjiteiru
[garuna esta aa]
[kantisa sonte via ia
adisa sonte via ia
kantisa sonte via ia
adisa sonte via ia]
[Dominus Sante filia mistiota fistala filia]
iki wo suru dake ja kanawai
motto fukaku made yuku tame no
namida to nageki wo kudasai
mugotarashii hodo kirei na kimi no kami-sama wa
hageshiku horobisaru mono dake wo aishita
Quo Vadis Domine?
sono koe wa inori to yobu made mo nai
itsuka kimi no negai dake ga todoku to shinjiteiru
[garuna esta aa]
haritsumeta sora no fumoto e
bokura wa nimotsu wo katsuide
nigeru you ni tsunnomette aruita
hajimari no hoshi wa shizuka ni
kimi no yukusaki wo terashite
aozameta tanizoko ni kagayaku
Quo Vadis Domine?
nagusame wo itsuka kimi no te no naka ni
hoshigaru kokoro no mama de wa
todokanai basho ni aru
[garuna esta]
[kantia sola fili hiya mistiosa ata arito imi to sonti lia]
akiramezu te wo nobasu
yokubukai kokoro ga
mitasarete nemuru made
hikari ni tooi michi wo
[Dominus Sante filia mistiota fistala filia]
nandemo tabetai tamashii
kajiritsuita yume hakisute
awaremi wo kudasai to sakenda
Quo Vadis Domine?
nagusame wo itsuka kimi no te no naka ni
subete moyashitsukushita koro
todoku to shinjiteiru
[garuna esta aa]
[kantisa sonte via ia
adisa sonte via ia
kantisa sonte via ia
adisa sonte via ia]
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NenaArindrasari
Guest
Re:
I think "canto lamento" literally means "lament singing". I just checked it on google translate.
But I think the best meaning is "singing in lament" or "song of lament".
or maybe "I'm singing in lament"!
What do you think?
nimsaj said:i can't read the scans that were posted because the kanji are too small, but i managed to read 'canto lamento' and 'obbligato' (lol) so here's a translation of obbligato by earthis song is love.
i'll edit the translation once someone can type up the kanji
and if im correct, canto lamento means i sing of lament? my spanish isn't helping much here lol if i'm wrong, please correct me.
I think "canto lamento" literally means "lament singing". I just checked it on google translate.
But I think the best meaning is "singing in lament" or "song of lament".
or maybe "I'm singing in lament"!
What do you think?
george1234
Moderator
^ I think that since both words have the same end they should be the same grammatically too, so if they are verbs they should be translated as verbs (and not as participles or anything) in this case, they are verbs and this can be proven here http://www.uvm.edu/~cmazzoni/3grammatic ... esent.html
so the translation in english should be in present simple singular first person > I sing. I lament. (well yuki seems to have forgotten the "io" but eh XD)
so the translation in english should be in present simple singular first person > I sing. I lament. (well yuki seems to have forgotten the "io" but eh XD)
Lorde-Kowz
I have reached Yuki nirvana
Lamento is a verb and a noun.
So (io) canto lamento > (I) sing lament/regret/mourn/whatever
So (io) canto lamento > (I) sing lament/regret/mourn/whatever
george1234
Moderator
@ NenaArindrasari the translation is here viewtopic.php?p=225776#p225776
and here's the cpm page http://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/consolation/
and here's the cpm page http://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/consolation/
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missjasminnn
Guest
^ nimsaj's translation of consolation is the more accurate one, tbh. the one you posted has many mistakes.
george1234
Moderator
^ Oh didnt noticed she had done one too, that why I used that one. btw welcome back, if you want you can join here viewtopic.php?f=3&t=4164 :)
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missjasminnn
Guest
thanks for the welcome back, but i am always lurking! i just barely sign in....
yeah, she did one of yume no daichi and hanataba after consolation. the other translations are okay, but they have a lots of grammar mistakes.
i just barely sign in....yeah, she did one of yume no daichi and hanataba after consolation. the other translations are okay, but they have a lots of grammar mistakes.
george1234
Moderator
replaced it. The reason I didnt see it is that she has the bad habbit of posting the translations without the song title