well really good job there
, well it does looks like mine in some places (similar to my old keiko birthday walp i think[with those frame all over the places and three pictures of the same person in different style])
some opinion from me: the wings are not really fit with her(the YK-sensei's picture is way too real for those imaginary styled wings, maybe you should use more realistic wings pict) and there's too much colors there maybe
so it clashes one another and it's just gave me confusing effect, and it;s also clash with her pict (in the same reason as the wings) , and if you want to make it as wallp it's not really good because there's too much words there, and if you use it as wallp it'll looks like a mess
well some in the past i've made some of those mistakes too, you can compare my old pictures with the latest ones