ひかりふる

yuki.n said:
A few tiny corrections :bow:

until the distant future ← until the future that's moving away

in the dazzling tomorrow ← morning, not tomorrow

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corrections from you are always welcome, yuki.n :sohappy:
i think i'm bad at translating from japanese, anyways haha

but wow. i feel so dumb. why did i write tomorrow???? lol brb laughing at myself :XD:
 
Maybe you got confused with asu? :XD: lol don't worry, I've done much worse :XD:

Anyway, you're really good at translating from Japanese! If you go out there and look at lyrics translations, many of them totally miss the point :uh..: so two or three minor points here and there (from someone as pedantic as I am) means you're really really good! :bow:
 
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Ophelia Arcana said:
I think I heard Kajiurago in the background chorus a few seconds before this stanza is sung:

kanarazu mite (sugu ni)
kieteyuki sou na sekai (dake de)
kimi ga iru sore dake de
mamoritai to omotta
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Actual there are are kajiurago thought the bridge but most of which in a way that cant be heard clearly no matter what (even after audacity :uh..:)

[EDIT] Lyrics up but they need lots of lines fixing
The magia page has also been updated with the new info for Magia quattro

http://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/hikari-furu/
http://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/mirai/

Will link to the website tomorrow (this means that for now you can access it only via here)

@missjasminn: Woudnt it be more correct to say "dreamy song" instead of dreamlike ? (in Mirai) ? :confu:
 
george, you posted the ones that were not corrected!



light
and a dreamlike song
are the soft sky that dampens your cheek
a small heart that goes far, just one
is a wing that still trembles

towards tomorrow
towards a dear yesterday
let's go on to grant our small promise
that we sealed with these fingers
that day in the end of time
where i will be able to see you
becomes the only lavish wish inside my heart
until the the future that's moving away

even if i am nowhere to be seen
everything will shine, within the light
because i will always be by your side

we are in an over transient world
that suddenly seems to be disappearing
however, you are here, and with just that
i decided i wanted to protect you

shut your eyes in quiet prayer
because we will soon reach
the only remaining peace
in the dazzling morning

light and a dreamlike song illuminate you


and er....dreamy is kind of a kid word, i think. it'll make that line sound weird. dreamlike sounds more "poetic" to me.

"light and a dreamy song" <-- that just sounds awkward to me...
 
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