Ayashii's Lair

Yay! Thank's for taking the time to listen, Maha! I see you're one of my very few "fans".

Origami Suzuran doesn't really have one melody, but rather it's composed of more melodies. I was thinking of the coming of spring, so you can picture it, if you'd like, as every living creature being it's own song that starts playing as the sun touches them.

I shall try vocals soon enough. in fact, God's Crib is likely going to have vocals, since a friend of mine proposed he try singing on it. I'm quite looking forward to it since i have no clue what his mind will spawn next. (He's also a composer and aspiring singer).

And yes, well, i have my own structures in my mind however, in a more commercial sense, i do seem to need to write my stories better. You mean something to build up towards? Like a climax? ..Yes...mine tend to be anticlimactic lately xD

I'll definitely work on that.

Oh yes, M11. Lol. Such wonderful and stressful memories. ^^

Hah! Don't worry, man! You're anything but what you said there.
The thing is, music exists in order to please listeners. The listeners need to like it for the composer to be liked/successful.

So as a listener, you have every possible right to make observations, critics about what you dislike and about what you like. Even more so, it would be ideal, so i can better myself at this, so i can please you more.

You know the old saying: "I'm here to please you, master!" xD
 
Latest thing.

I am full of you

This one i'm thinking of having someone sing on it.
It also has lyrics. xD

City lights to conquer
the shadow that is you
Bright shadow dancing proud
You kinda like it, don't you?

I was so wrong
to assume we're alike
But forgive me,
you were teasing me

I though the rain that falls on me
to be the same that falls on you

It's been a long time coming
But I am only one
No loyal friend was ever there
And praised the gods that heard me!

If the lights go brighter
to burn, to hurt, no fun
When light leaves you to you
why do you still go follow?

This all of you,
I can drink, all your lake,
I can sing all your notes
If i can't, i can fake

My dissonant and see-through hate
rings false even to me, you see,

It's been a long time coming
But this is me
No loyal friend was ever there
And praised the gods that heard me!

Why did i fear you
Why did i hate
for i see now,
I feel your weight

I am full of you
...

It's been a long time coming
But this is me
No loyal friend was ever there
And praised the gods that heard me!
 
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