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ring your song cover~
ring your song cover~
ninetales said:I finally got caught up on all your covers!
Open Your Heart I really like. You came up with a really interesting arrangement for it, so it sounds very good. There are a few little mistakes I can hear, so I hope you re-record it someday.
Maybe Tomorrow is really sweet. I like the way you use chords for the main melody a lot.
I like Forest too. The piano is a little too staccatto, not as flowing as I'd like, but I know how hard it is to play and sing at the same time! Your voice is great, and I love your accent.
Fields of Hope is nice, but something doesn't sound right about the piano when you sing the first line...you might be playing the wrong chords, but I haven't listened to the song much, so I'm not sure. The chorus is beautiful!
I think Canta Per Me would sound a little better on the piano, to be honest. The keyboard is okay, but it sounds a little strange. Otherwise this is good too.
I like your original IMLFCS better than the second one...the lower key sounds a little muddy, for some reason.
Your piano sounds so good in Fake Wings! I love the way you play the opening part. The inflections in your voice are lovely.
Jumping Fish is beautiful too. I think you sang a few words some of the melody wrong, but it's not very noticeable.
The piano in Ring Your Song is great! Sounds like you need to practice the lyrics, but everything else is perfect.
For Stone Cold, I'd suggest practicing the lyrics and the melody a little more, and having just one of you sing the English parts.
Hanamori no Oka is in a really low key! It sounds pretty good, but I'd like to hear you sing it in the original key too.
Kagayaku sounds very nice, but I think you keep missing some notes here and there. Something about it sounds a little...flat, too, since there aren't many changes in the dynamic till the end. I'd like to hear this re-recorded!
Again, I think Fairytale needs some work too. The key sounds too low again, and it's a little flat-sounding. But it's cool that you tried singing it by yourself!
Parallel Hearts sounds very good! I like the way it starts out slow and then picks up speed a bit.
How about trying Adore, Vanity, or Michiyuki next? Kugatsu or Calling might sound good too.
valeriana runa said:michiyuki :D
and mizu no akashi