Just because you're a critic doesn't mean you're right. Also counteracting in the exact same manner is ineffective. The angle doesn't bother me at all, the eyes look more like she's wearing makeup and I don't really see any issue there, the messy hair I can agree with but messy hair has its own appeal in my opinion. The smiling thing I can also agree with, I wish they would smile more in photoshoots. I may not know all the intricate details and everything about the ways of photography but I honestly don't see anything wrong with that photo at all, I didn't see anything wrong with it at a glance nor am I seeing anything wrong after further inspection in order to check your claims, she looks lovely to me.