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this is the first chapter of 320 page novel i made for school assignment. i used google translate to translate it into English which turns out to be good translation.
okay, heres chapter 1 (Indonesian version: http://fcti.multiply.com/notes/item/123)
Phase I
Conspiracy, Secret, and
Reality
By 2015, technology has increasingly developed world. A base on the moon successfully made to mine stone in moon which in theory have a source of great energy and even exceed the Helium 3. Eight years have passed since the conflict in middle east countries and other countries ended. CIA United States declared that the terrorist organization Al-Qaeda no longer exists after a massive manhunt Al-Qaeda members carried out simultaneously across the world. Osama Bin Laden has also been declared dead after hiding known and bunkers destroyed by air strikes. Although the world is in a state of peace, but the proliferation of weapons still be done. Various types of new weapons have been created by reason of protecting the State and against the terrorists. The question now is who the real terrorists and enemy? Where are they located? When will they move? How far they are with us? Or ... .. How close they are with us?
Phase 1
Dessfar
That afternoon at 16:00 at a place called Area 51 contained in the Nevada desert of the United States. Area 51 is a place full of mystery that spread conspiracyi to the public. Area 51 is actually a place of study various technologies for military purposes the United States, not a few people who believe that Americans save an alien aircraft that had fallen on earth.
"Lieutenant Zwei, you are requested to report to the main laboratory," said the operator on the intercom room Lieutenant Mark Zwei.
Lt. Mark Zwei is the volunteer test subjects Bio-boosted Armor that is being developed at Area 51. Mark had just recovered from surgery which include a control medal which contains a computer chip and other components that function to control the Bio-boosted Armor into Mark's head. Control the medal was placed behind the bloom of the skull and connected to the brain directly. Before Mark recover from the operation she often felt a headache because his body was not used to the control medal was in his head.
Mark Arriving at the main laboratory, he was greeted by Dr. Otacon Smith. Dr. Otacon Smith is an expert on bio-technology and physics, and he also heads the Bio-boosted Armor research at Area 51 is done by the organization scientist Dr. Otacon called "The Patriots". "Mark, hows your head ?" He asked. Otacon. "It's better," replied Mark. "Good, today we will test the Bio-boosted Armor. Let's get out, we'll try it out, "said Dr. Otacon.
Mark, Dr.Otacon, other scientists, and observers from the pentagon ten people went out to see the ability of Bio-boosted Armor. In the experiment Dr. Otacon, other scientists, and analysts Mark pentagon was observed from a distance as she prepares to try the ability of Bio-boosted Armor. "Mark, there should tell you," said Dr. Otacon with loudspeakers. "What's that?" Ask Mark. "The name of the password from Bio-boosted Armor is Dessfar. Now try to concentrate on the control medal is in your head and say the word Dessfar, "explained Dr. Otacon to Mark. "Dessfar!" Mark shouted words Dessfar loudly, firmly, and loudly. Less than a second after the control medal at the head of Mark react. Mark came around the body's energy field that changes every particle of air around Mark's turned into like Armor when in contact with each particle and the molecules of the body of Mark. Mark noticed a change in the whole body by surprise, it all happened in just 1.5 seconds. Now his body is already covered sluruh Bio-boosted Armor look like a monster. Control Medal is in the head is now visible on his forehead.
"Ladies and gentlemen, now you are seeing is the Bio-boosted Armor," explained Dr. Otacon told the representatives of the Pentagon as he showed the picture on the monitor.
"Bio-boosted Armor is made of organic substances that are stronger than steel and lighter than Titanium Alloy though. Apart from being Armor, Bio-boosted Armor is also changing the structure of body tissue, muscle, and the DNA of the wearer so that the wearer has a sharp senses, a very strong physical ability, thinking skills and reflexes are very fast, "explained Dr. Otacon. "But how he can change like that? Where did it come Armor, "asked one representative from the Pentagon. "In the law of conservation of mass and energy states that mass and energy can not be created or destroyed, but can be changed from one form to another. In theory Warp, Albert Einstein said that particles of an object can be described with sufficient energy and reconstituted elsewhere. While the media to send the particle to the destination is one-dimensional space called Zero Space. So when Mark called Bio-boosted Armor, Control Medal is inside the head called particle Bio-boosted Armor stored in Zero Space to swap places with air particles in the vicinity of Mark so that the air particles around Mark had moved to the Zero Space until Mark took off his armor . Then the ten people from the pentagon was silent without any signs they understand or not.
"Mark, now I'm talking via radio with a special frequency that is connected to the Control Medal in your head so you can hear me telepathically bleak," said Dr. Otacon. "Telepathy?" Asked Mark. "Yes, and no one else to tell you. Because the code name Bio-boosted Armor is Dessfar, then after changing your name is Dessfar. So now I'll call you Dessfar, "said Dr. Otacon. "Well Dessfar, what if you ran around Area 51 as soon as possible. I will calculate the speed berlarimu, "said Dr. Otacon.
Then Dessfar started running. His body was getting used to using muscles that have been reinforced by Bio-boosted Armor. Dessfar ran very fast around Area 51 is very broad, even when the basement of Area 51 is much more widely. Then Dessfar finished around Area 51 and back into place.
"your speed around 250 km / h," said Dr. Otacon. "Now what if we test your strength?" Said Dr. Otacon.
Then two types of Humvee military jeep came close Dessfar 5. After the two cars approached the driver Dessfar one of the cars were moved to the other car and the car went away from Dessfar.
"Dessfar, you try to lift the fifth Humvee vehicle was dank au throw as far as possible," Dr. command. Otacon. 5 Humvee Dessfar lift car and threw it. The car was thrown about thirteen feet.
"Good, now we try a more severe," said Dr. Otacon.
Then the Humvee the other five came back near Dessfar. But this time came also a tank type ABRAMS 3 Modern Battle Tank, Battle Tank The latest types including the most severe types of tanks. And also like the previous driver's tanks moved into the Humvee Dessfar 5 and go away.
Dessfar tanks approached it with hesitation. Then he lifted the weight. Dessfar managed to lift it above his head tank. Dessfar throw the tank after holding above his head for a few seconds. Tanks were thrown as far as ten meters.
"Good, Bio-boosted Armor it does make your body become very strong," said Dr.Otacon. Dessfar riveted attention to her hands by not believing what he just did.
"Dessfar, your ability not only that," said Dr.Otacon. "One is the High Frequency Blade weapon that is in your elbow," said Dr. Otacon.
"How do I remove it?" Asked Dessfar.
"Bio-Armor Bossted it has become part of you, so you can remove your weapons such as moving the body itself," explained Dr. Otacon.
Then Dessfar tried to remove the High Frequency Blade in his elbow. He concentrated his work the new section.
Sriiiing !..... from the right hand elbow Dessfar out high frequency blade that vibrates with high frequency even seen silent. Sriiiiing !..... then issued a High Frequency Blade Dessfar in the elbow of his left hand.
"Good, now try to split the last tank with a sword," Dr. command. Otacon.
Dessfar immediately ran towards the tanks and jump. He was surprised because the jump is higher than the final estimate. High Frequency Blade Dessfar swung her when she landed right in front of the tank which was upside down.
Friction between the High Frequency Blade Dessfar with a layer of steel from the tanks that generate sparks and deafening sound.
A moment later Dessfar, Dr. Otacon, other scientists, and representatives of the Pentagon stunned to see tears in the body length of the thick steel tanks. The comments of admiration were heard from the representatives of the Pentagon and other scientists.
"Good, High Frequency Blade was indeed made of similar material metal harder than steel and metals of any kind," said Dr. Otacon. "Now stay away from the tank," Dr. command. Otacon. Then Dessfar away from the tank as instructed Dr.Otacon.
"There is still a weapon again?" Asked Dessfar.
"Yes, now open your chest Armor parts carefully aside, reversed Armor chest there are two very powerful laser cannons," explained Dr. Otacon.
"Laser cannon?" Asked Dessfar.
"Once you open the chest laterally Armor tank fire before," Dr. command. Otacon.
Armor Dessfar open the chest to the left and right laterally. Then about three seconds later he fired a second laser cannon as easily as he had issued a High Frequency Blade.
Tank hit by a laser fired Dessfar melt and fall apart because of the amount of heat and energy produced Dessfar laser cannon. The representatives of the Pentagon, other scientists, Dessfar, and even Dr. Otacon also surprised at the power of the laser fired Dessfar very dazzling. Then the representatives applauded the Pentagon praised the greatness of Bio-boosted Armor Dr artificial. Otacon.
"Dr. Otacon, there memangnya arms again? I think this is the most powerful weapon, "said Dessfar.
"Laser cannon was the most powerful weapon. Name of the laser cannon is a Mega Smasher. Mega Smasher takes the lag time of three seconds before it can be fired. So use it if the time is right, "said Dr. Otacon. But because it's late experiments for other weapons we do tomorrow. There are still some more weapons that we must try, "said Dr. Otacon.
"But how do I remove this Bio-boosted Armor?" Asked Dessfar.
"Remember Dessfar, all functions of the Bio-boosted Armor is already integrated with your brain so that you can control it like moving your body itself. Although it takes more concentration when you first do it until your brain is accustomed to moving the Bio-boosted Armor, "said Dr. Otacon
Then Dessfar concentrate to remove the Bio-boosted Armor him. A few seconds later came the energy field, such as when he changed. But this time the particles of Bio-boosted Armor it decomposes and returns to Zero Space. Mark finally returned to normal.
It was at 21.00. Mark, Dr. Otacon, other scientists, and representatives pentagon it back into the Area 51. After discussing the experiment Dessfar earlier in the main laboratory, they returned to their room because other Dessfar weapons experiments will be done tomorrow morning.
At 2:15. In addition to the guards and staff interested everyone was fast asleep, including Mark, Dr. Otacon, other scientists and representatives of the Pentagon who stay there.
Suddenly the emergency alarm sounds. Mark, Dr, Otacon, other scientists, representatives of the pentagon, and others who are fell asleep awakened by a very loud alarm sound.
"What happened?" Lieutenant General Olson said in the main operating room area 51. Mark, Dr. Otacon, and the others arrived a few moments and then come to ask what happened.
"Sir, there are three missile was heading for us!" Said radar operator.
"What kind of missile," said Lieutenant General Olson told the radar operator.
"Intercontinental cruise missile pack. From its size it is possible types of large blast radius, "said radar operator who is trained to not panic.
"Patriot missile launches! Instruct all personnel to enter the bunker! "Command Lieutenant General Olson.
Less than five seconds later the air raid alarm warning and command bunker for shelter into the ring. together with the alarm had six Patriot missile was also fired to destroy missiles that led to Area 51.
All Area 51 personnel had entered into a bunker on command. Mark, Lieutenant General Olson and others still in the operating room noticed the radar.
In radar, and other Mark and see how the six Patriot missile close to the three missiles that come with high speed. The tension they had reduced a bit when they saw the first two Patriot missiles successfully on the first cruise missiles. But the next two cruise missiles that fly a few seconds behind the first cruise missiles began to lose altitude when it reaches the straight path towards Area 51. Mark and others re-strained when the other four Patriot missiles can not follow the movement of both cruise missiles that.
"Sir, four Patriot missile is not on target!" Screamed a radar operator who had started to panic.
"Ten seconds before the missile was there!" Screamed the radar operator.
"What should we do now?" Asked Mark.
"Eight seconds!" Screamed the radar operator.
"Mark, use Bio-boosted Armor yours!" Command Dr. Otacon
"But what about the others?" Asked Mark.
"Six seconds!" Screamed the radio operator again.
"Fast just do it!" Command Dr. Otacon
"Four seconds!" Radio operators were getting frantic.
"Hurry, you must not die Mark!" Shouted Dr. Otacon
"Two ... ... one ..."
"Dessfaaaaar!" Mark screamed at the last moment
The explosion creates a very bright light and sound louder than thunder in the middle of the dark night of the Nevada Desert.
Of a crater in the blast. Among the ruins Area 51. Appears a figure of people. Someone with a Bio-boosted Armor on his body.
Dessfar looked around. He saw the flames and the remains of the ruins of Area 51. Many corpses everywhere. Looks like Area 51 bunkers were destroyed until the most deeply. He did not see anyone else that survived. Then he realizes that only she was the only survivor of the explosion earlier.
Feeling sad, angry, and mixed emotions that make Dessfar screaming bloody murder over the ruins of Area 51 in the middle of the night cold desert of Nevada.
end of chapter 1
enjoy, i expect your opinion
okay, heres chapter 1 (Indonesian version: http://fcti.multiply.com/notes/item/123)
Phase I
Conspiracy, Secret, and
Reality
By 2015, technology has increasingly developed world. A base on the moon successfully made to mine stone in moon which in theory have a source of great energy and even exceed the Helium 3. Eight years have passed since the conflict in middle east countries and other countries ended. CIA United States declared that the terrorist organization Al-Qaeda no longer exists after a massive manhunt Al-Qaeda members carried out simultaneously across the world. Osama Bin Laden has also been declared dead after hiding known and bunkers destroyed by air strikes. Although the world is in a state of peace, but the proliferation of weapons still be done. Various types of new weapons have been created by reason of protecting the State and against the terrorists. The question now is who the real terrorists and enemy? Where are they located? When will they move? How far they are with us? Or ... .. How close they are with us?
Phase 1
Dessfar
That afternoon at 16:00 at a place called Area 51 contained in the Nevada desert of the United States. Area 51 is a place full of mystery that spread conspiracyi to the public. Area 51 is actually a place of study various technologies for military purposes the United States, not a few people who believe that Americans save an alien aircraft that had fallen on earth.
"Lieutenant Zwei, you are requested to report to the main laboratory," said the operator on the intercom room Lieutenant Mark Zwei.
Lt. Mark Zwei is the volunteer test subjects Bio-boosted Armor that is being developed at Area 51. Mark had just recovered from surgery which include a control medal which contains a computer chip and other components that function to control the Bio-boosted Armor into Mark's head. Control the medal was placed behind the bloom of the skull and connected to the brain directly. Before Mark recover from the operation she often felt a headache because his body was not used to the control medal was in his head.
Mark Arriving at the main laboratory, he was greeted by Dr. Otacon Smith. Dr. Otacon Smith is an expert on bio-technology and physics, and he also heads the Bio-boosted Armor research at Area 51 is done by the organization scientist Dr. Otacon called "The Patriots". "Mark, hows your head ?" He asked. Otacon. "It's better," replied Mark. "Good, today we will test the Bio-boosted Armor. Let's get out, we'll try it out, "said Dr. Otacon.
Mark, Dr.Otacon, other scientists, and observers from the pentagon ten people went out to see the ability of Bio-boosted Armor. In the experiment Dr. Otacon, other scientists, and analysts Mark pentagon was observed from a distance as she prepares to try the ability of Bio-boosted Armor. "Mark, there should tell you," said Dr. Otacon with loudspeakers. "What's that?" Ask Mark. "The name of the password from Bio-boosted Armor is Dessfar. Now try to concentrate on the control medal is in your head and say the word Dessfar, "explained Dr. Otacon to Mark. "Dessfar!" Mark shouted words Dessfar loudly, firmly, and loudly. Less than a second after the control medal at the head of Mark react. Mark came around the body's energy field that changes every particle of air around Mark's turned into like Armor when in contact with each particle and the molecules of the body of Mark. Mark noticed a change in the whole body by surprise, it all happened in just 1.5 seconds. Now his body is already covered sluruh Bio-boosted Armor look like a monster. Control Medal is in the head is now visible on his forehead.
"Ladies and gentlemen, now you are seeing is the Bio-boosted Armor," explained Dr. Otacon told the representatives of the Pentagon as he showed the picture on the monitor.
"Bio-boosted Armor is made of organic substances that are stronger than steel and lighter than Titanium Alloy though. Apart from being Armor, Bio-boosted Armor is also changing the structure of body tissue, muscle, and the DNA of the wearer so that the wearer has a sharp senses, a very strong physical ability, thinking skills and reflexes are very fast, "explained Dr. Otacon. "But how he can change like that? Where did it come Armor, "asked one representative from the Pentagon. "In the law of conservation of mass and energy states that mass and energy can not be created or destroyed, but can be changed from one form to another. In theory Warp, Albert Einstein said that particles of an object can be described with sufficient energy and reconstituted elsewhere. While the media to send the particle to the destination is one-dimensional space called Zero Space. So when Mark called Bio-boosted Armor, Control Medal is inside the head called particle Bio-boosted Armor stored in Zero Space to swap places with air particles in the vicinity of Mark so that the air particles around Mark had moved to the Zero Space until Mark took off his armor . Then the ten people from the pentagon was silent without any signs they understand or not.
"Mark, now I'm talking via radio with a special frequency that is connected to the Control Medal in your head so you can hear me telepathically bleak," said Dr. Otacon. "Telepathy?" Asked Mark. "Yes, and no one else to tell you. Because the code name Bio-boosted Armor is Dessfar, then after changing your name is Dessfar. So now I'll call you Dessfar, "said Dr. Otacon. "Well Dessfar, what if you ran around Area 51 as soon as possible. I will calculate the speed berlarimu, "said Dr. Otacon.
Then Dessfar started running. His body was getting used to using muscles that have been reinforced by Bio-boosted Armor. Dessfar ran very fast around Area 51 is very broad, even when the basement of Area 51 is much more widely. Then Dessfar finished around Area 51 and back into place.
"your speed around 250 km / h," said Dr. Otacon. "Now what if we test your strength?" Said Dr. Otacon.
Then two types of Humvee military jeep came close Dessfar 5. After the two cars approached the driver Dessfar one of the cars were moved to the other car and the car went away from Dessfar.
"Dessfar, you try to lift the fifth Humvee vehicle was dank au throw as far as possible," Dr. command. Otacon. 5 Humvee Dessfar lift car and threw it. The car was thrown about thirteen feet.
"Good, now we try a more severe," said Dr. Otacon.
Then the Humvee the other five came back near Dessfar. But this time came also a tank type ABRAMS 3 Modern Battle Tank, Battle Tank The latest types including the most severe types of tanks. And also like the previous driver's tanks moved into the Humvee Dessfar 5 and go away.
Dessfar tanks approached it with hesitation. Then he lifted the weight. Dessfar managed to lift it above his head tank. Dessfar throw the tank after holding above his head for a few seconds. Tanks were thrown as far as ten meters.
"Good, Bio-boosted Armor it does make your body become very strong," said Dr.Otacon. Dessfar riveted attention to her hands by not believing what he just did.
"Dessfar, your ability not only that," said Dr.Otacon. "One is the High Frequency Blade weapon that is in your elbow," said Dr. Otacon.
"How do I remove it?" Asked Dessfar.
"Bio-Armor Bossted it has become part of you, so you can remove your weapons such as moving the body itself," explained Dr. Otacon.
Then Dessfar tried to remove the High Frequency Blade in his elbow. He concentrated his work the new section.
Sriiiing !..... from the right hand elbow Dessfar out high frequency blade that vibrates with high frequency even seen silent. Sriiiiing !..... then issued a High Frequency Blade Dessfar in the elbow of his left hand.
"Good, now try to split the last tank with a sword," Dr. command. Otacon.
Dessfar immediately ran towards the tanks and jump. He was surprised because the jump is higher than the final estimate. High Frequency Blade Dessfar swung her when she landed right in front of the tank which was upside down.
Friction between the High Frequency Blade Dessfar with a layer of steel from the tanks that generate sparks and deafening sound.
A moment later Dessfar, Dr. Otacon, other scientists, and representatives of the Pentagon stunned to see tears in the body length of the thick steel tanks. The comments of admiration were heard from the representatives of the Pentagon and other scientists.
"Good, High Frequency Blade was indeed made of similar material metal harder than steel and metals of any kind," said Dr. Otacon. "Now stay away from the tank," Dr. command. Otacon. Then Dessfar away from the tank as instructed Dr.Otacon.
"There is still a weapon again?" Asked Dessfar.
"Yes, now open your chest Armor parts carefully aside, reversed Armor chest there are two very powerful laser cannons," explained Dr. Otacon.
"Laser cannon?" Asked Dessfar.
"Once you open the chest laterally Armor tank fire before," Dr. command. Otacon.
Armor Dessfar open the chest to the left and right laterally. Then about three seconds later he fired a second laser cannon as easily as he had issued a High Frequency Blade.
Tank hit by a laser fired Dessfar melt and fall apart because of the amount of heat and energy produced Dessfar laser cannon. The representatives of the Pentagon, other scientists, Dessfar, and even Dr. Otacon also surprised at the power of the laser fired Dessfar very dazzling. Then the representatives applauded the Pentagon praised the greatness of Bio-boosted Armor Dr artificial. Otacon.
"Dr. Otacon, there memangnya arms again? I think this is the most powerful weapon, "said Dessfar.
"Laser cannon was the most powerful weapon. Name of the laser cannon is a Mega Smasher. Mega Smasher takes the lag time of three seconds before it can be fired. So use it if the time is right, "said Dr. Otacon. But because it's late experiments for other weapons we do tomorrow. There are still some more weapons that we must try, "said Dr. Otacon.
"But how do I remove this Bio-boosted Armor?" Asked Dessfar.
"Remember Dessfar, all functions of the Bio-boosted Armor is already integrated with your brain so that you can control it like moving your body itself. Although it takes more concentration when you first do it until your brain is accustomed to moving the Bio-boosted Armor, "said Dr. Otacon
Then Dessfar concentrate to remove the Bio-boosted Armor him. A few seconds later came the energy field, such as when he changed. But this time the particles of Bio-boosted Armor it decomposes and returns to Zero Space. Mark finally returned to normal.
It was at 21.00. Mark, Dr. Otacon, other scientists, and representatives pentagon it back into the Area 51. After discussing the experiment Dessfar earlier in the main laboratory, they returned to their room because other Dessfar weapons experiments will be done tomorrow morning.
At 2:15. In addition to the guards and staff interested everyone was fast asleep, including Mark, Dr. Otacon, other scientists and representatives of the Pentagon who stay there.
Suddenly the emergency alarm sounds. Mark, Dr, Otacon, other scientists, representatives of the pentagon, and others who are fell asleep awakened by a very loud alarm sound.
"What happened?" Lieutenant General Olson said in the main operating room area 51. Mark, Dr. Otacon, and the others arrived a few moments and then come to ask what happened.
"Sir, there are three missile was heading for us!" Said radar operator.
"What kind of missile," said Lieutenant General Olson told the radar operator.
"Intercontinental cruise missile pack. From its size it is possible types of large blast radius, "said radar operator who is trained to not panic.
"Patriot missile launches! Instruct all personnel to enter the bunker! "Command Lieutenant General Olson.
Less than five seconds later the air raid alarm warning and command bunker for shelter into the ring. together with the alarm had six Patriot missile was also fired to destroy missiles that led to Area 51.
All Area 51 personnel had entered into a bunker on command. Mark, Lieutenant General Olson and others still in the operating room noticed the radar.
In radar, and other Mark and see how the six Patriot missile close to the three missiles that come with high speed. The tension they had reduced a bit when they saw the first two Patriot missiles successfully on the first cruise missiles. But the next two cruise missiles that fly a few seconds behind the first cruise missiles began to lose altitude when it reaches the straight path towards Area 51. Mark and others re-strained when the other four Patriot missiles can not follow the movement of both cruise missiles that.
"Sir, four Patriot missile is not on target!" Screamed a radar operator who had started to panic.
"Ten seconds before the missile was there!" Screamed the radar operator.
"What should we do now?" Asked Mark.
"Eight seconds!" Screamed the radar operator.
"Mark, use Bio-boosted Armor yours!" Command Dr. Otacon
"But what about the others?" Asked Mark.
"Six seconds!" Screamed the radio operator again.
"Fast just do it!" Command Dr. Otacon
"Four seconds!" Radio operators were getting frantic.
"Hurry, you must not die Mark!" Shouted Dr. Otacon
"Two ... ... one ..."
"Dessfaaaaar!" Mark screamed at the last moment
The explosion creates a very bright light and sound louder than thunder in the middle of the dark night of the Nevada Desert.
Of a crater in the blast. Among the ruins Area 51. Appears a figure of people. Someone with a Bio-boosted Armor on his body.
Dessfar looked around. He saw the flames and the remains of the ruins of Area 51. Many corpses everywhere. Looks like Area 51 bunkers were destroyed until the most deeply. He did not see anyone else that survived. Then he realizes that only she was the only survivor of the explosion earlier.
Feeling sad, angry, and mixed emotions that make Dessfar screaming bloody murder over the ruins of Area 51 in the middle of the night cold desert of Nevada.
end of chapter 1
enjoy, i expect your opinion