Kimi ga ita monogatari romaji corrections

[yuki.n]

http://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/kimi-ga-ita-monogatari/

I just noticed several mistakes in the romaji near the beginning Here's the corrected part:

Shizukesa to yasuragi ga
tooku de maneku kara
Mou sukoshi saki ni made
yukesou na ki ga suru
Tada te wo toriatte
kooritsuku yoru wo koete

Kizutsuite utsumuita
toki ni deatta kara
Setsunasa ga nakunareba
hanarete yuku you de
Yogoreta mizu no ue
dakara tsuki no kage ga
kirei de

I didn't find any mistakes after that.

 

[george1234]

so the translation is ok ? :)

 

[yuki.n]

translation by arqnohikari and Yuki.n

 

[george1234]

LOL sorry, I though we had an old one (didnt even look at the bottom) ^^;