You have a really big voice, good vibrato, and such a nice tone! :) The effort you put into your performance was great!! Very nice job! "ARIA" is my favorite Kalafina song, especially the live version with Maya. ;w;
Just some suggestions (I'm just trying to help, the music ed. major in me is coming out, ahhhh):
- Try not to shout/belt on those C's (the "u" in "mou" and the "e" in "ne," is where that pitch is), mainly because it's not good for your voice (more importantly, for any singer). I'm aware Hikaru belts those pretty darn well in the live version of "ARIA", but since the color of your voice is darker than hers, I don't recommend doing it. The way you can get it to sound clear and not forced, is by breathing correctly. C:
- Be careful -- don't be tempted to imitate Hikaru's voice! Trust me, I could tell, because I have done that as well when I have tried to sing "ARIA" in the past. XD There were a couple parts in your cover when you did that (mainly before the chorus and during the chorus).
- You were lagging a bit with the Kajiuran, taking a rest a beat longer than intended. Watch for that!
Umm, hope you don't mind my advice! I just like to help others with singing. Once again, great job!~